You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag Though you filled your claim to Lost and Found Department you have not received your bag yet In your letter 1 write the details of incident 2 inquire the status of your lost bag to airline 3 tell wha

Essay topics:

You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department',you have not received your bag yet.

In your letter:-

(1) write the details of incident.
(2) inquire the status of your lost bag to airline.
(3) tell what you want if the bag is not found.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing this letter regarding my baggage claim filed on Dec 21st, 2017 with Air Europa airlines. I have traveled to Germany via London on Dec 20th, 2017 with Air Europa Airlines. As there was a delay of two hours with my connecting flight in London Airport, I have asked to board on to the next available flight which is four hours away from my actual boarding time. Also, I was confirmed by the Airlines authorities that my baggage will be reach on time before I reach Germany international Airport.

As it was confirmed, I boarded the next flight and reached Germany international airport. I was waiting near Air Europa airline luggage conveyor belt to receive my baggage but it didn’t reach me. So, I went to your airline customer support center and inquired about the status of my baggage. They suggested to give my contact address and my baggage will reach me in two hours. Unfortunately, it didn’t reach me until the next day and called again the customer service to file a lost and found incident ticket.

It's been more than 3 days since I filed my complaint but there is no status update on my claim status. As I’m on the official trip, I have my office suits and other important things are left behind with the baggage. I’m requesting your airline to take additional interests to find my luggage as early as possible otherwise I had to go for filing lawsuit against your airline and will take persuasive measures.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Arumoh

Votes
Average: 8.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I reach Germany international Airport. As it was confirmed, I boarded the next ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60695457865 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5364845873 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16996008453 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709022660221 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614911882061 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109522365296 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395977925718 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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