You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university.
Write a letter to inquire about about a course. In your letter:
- explain which course you are interested in.
- tell what you know about the university
- explain why you should receive the scholarship.
Dear Mr. Max,
I’m writing this letter with regards to the scholarship program to study at Virginia university which I read in New York times on Sunday 2nd Dec, 2018.
Heard from my seniors that Virginia university offering good scholarship program for many eligible students. It’s one of very good reputed university with various courses provided by great scholars. Also, heard many companies may visit for on-campus interview. I would pursue my education in Biology from the university as I have interested in learning significance of the human systems and its importance. From my point of view, it’s very useful to know about the organs as it may help you to stay fit. This course provides lots of career opportunity for associate lectures posts in many schools and colleges.
I’m a gold medalist in state level swimming competition, represented many volunteer programs, attended leadership training in my high school and participated in inter-college competition. Hope these criteria are enough for me to get a scholarship at Virginia university. Please let me know if you need any additional information.
Yours sincerely,
Arumoh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew York times on Sunday 2nd Dec, 2018. Heard from my seniors that Virgin...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s posts in many schools and colleges. I'm a gold medalist in state...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46408839779 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98768878926 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707182320442 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6987793735 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214561861225 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707489546131 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442181363486 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129407203427 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252650828481 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.