A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.1- Say where you went,2- Where you stayed,3- What you can do there
Dear George,
I’m writing this letter regarding my recommendation for a good place to visit during your holiday. Hope all your family members are doing well. As you are recently married, I would suggest taking your wife to any hill station. It reminds me of a hill station named Mount terrace near Georgia and it’s approximately 100 miles from Atlanta.
I remember we went there during my summer holidays when we got married almost 5 years back. There are lots of decent and affordable resorts available near the hill station. Also, recommend contacting some travel agency to book for resorts as they may give you additional discounts on your stay.
We have stayed in a resort named Hotel Regency which is approximately 10 miles from the Rose garden located at the foot hills of Mount terrace. It’s a beautiful view and had lots of souvenir shops around the garden. There are other scenic spots where we can spend our night by doing camps and other fun activities. Also, don’t forgot to do Rafting on the Henry river and it’s one of the thrill adventure to try it.
The Four-season restaurant located at the Mount terrace was the most reviewed in Yellow pages and there was an awesome list of menus with food varieties. I would recommend plan before you visit the hill station and hope it gives you loads of unforgettable event with your family. Please send your feedback after the visit.
I’m looking forward for your response.
Thanks,
Arumoh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Mount) must be used with a third-person verb: 'terraces'.
Suggestion: terraces
...eminds me of a hill station named Mount terrace near Georgia and it's approximatel...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'load'
Suggestion: load
... the hill station and hope it gives you loads of unforgettable event with your family...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.992 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4951152278 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2031984917 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274304358881 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801632647097 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895850525588 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146970127989 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717861727503 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.