Hey Rakesh,
I hope you doing good and thanks for reaching out to me for suggestions. I wish I could have responded sooner but I have been busy with my new housewarming formalities. Anyway here are my two cents on where you can go for a perfect vacation. I strongly suggest you visit New Zealand especially the southern island of the country. I was there last year and I have had one of the best road journeys ever in my life. The journey from Christchurch to Queenstown has breathtaking views and it is one of the most scenic roads.
Sara and I landed at Christchurch airport and rented a car from local renting companies. Our final destination on this trip was Queenstown. It took 2 nights for us to reach there and in between, we have experienced a few alpines and snowfall. Queenstown has an alias name “Adventures capital of the world” and believe me it won’t disappoint. There are loads of things one can experience starting from bungee jumping to sky diving. If we would like to have a nice and calm vacation, you can relax beside the lake and you could also go on a cruise trip. Coffee in the cruise is on the best :)
In terms of the food, there are plenty of restaurants which can offer a wide range of dishes from each and every corner of the world. We can have an English breakfast, French bread for and Indian roti as well.
I had a great time when was there last time, I hope you will have once in a lifetime experience if at all you visit.
Keep me posted with updates.
Warm Regards,
Sudheerkumar
Dear John,
Dear John,
Hope your doing good and thank you for asking suggestion for the holiday place to be visited. It's very important for an individual to have a refreshment after every busy schedule to hangout any of the places, which gives you immense pleasure and peace.
Firstly, we have many places to visit in and outside of India. However, this depends on the number of holidays that you are looking for instance if there is short period say a 2/3 days, then my advice would be to visit Goa, which is in Maharashtra. On the other hand, if you are looking for a long period could be more than a week, can visit the Singapore / Bali. When you are considering for the short span of time, i would suggest you to go and visit Goa, which is surrounded by the beautiful beaches and freshness. You will definitely going to love the beauty of nature, specially the sunset and immense peace with fresh air and you can get the best rooms with quite luxury as well as the affordable facilities. This place attracts many of the Indians as well as the foreigner's.
Looking for the another side for long term period, I would propose you for the Singapore / Bali, has very mesmerizing view with the beauty of nature. The other important factor here, you will also find Ganesh Temple and some historical monuments along with the beaches, peaceful atmosphere and likewise.
Finally, let me know, the time period your scheduling for the holidays. So that, i can give you more detail information on call.
Please give my regards to your parents and love to your siblings.
Yours Lovelingly,
Jenn
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...erience starting from bungee jumping to sky diving. If we would like to have a nice and ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52857142857 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7063349164 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9565160566 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5882352941 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242113894019 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692562913929 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086678157512 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119109282102 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862889895862 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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