Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him.
Dear Ive,
I’m writing this letter regarding your offer to me in your travel company. First, I would like to thank you for providing me this opportunity. I know about your company in the last four to five years and heard it’s a well-known travel company in the town. It has a very good reputation among the aged people as the arrangements made by your company are so comfortable for them to travel to any places.
Also, your company used to work for overseas clients with your minimal workforce. So, you are looking to increase your workforce strengths to meet or exceeds client’s expectation. I have an experience as a travel agent for a year and it was back when I was doing my college degree.
Unfortunately, I don’t want to accept your offer as my focus is now shift towards swimming and want to become more successful in this field. I have dedicated myself and working hard to achieve many more laurels in this sport. It’s my dream to become a great swimmer and want to be an Olympic champion. Also, I want to motivate many youngsters to learn swimming as it can help them in many ways.
Thanks for understanding and will talk to you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Arumoh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
Dear Ive, I'm writing this letter regar...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for them to travel to any places. Also, your company used to work for over...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when I was doing my college degree. Unfortunately, I don't want to acce...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'shifted'.
Suggestion: shifted
...to accept your offer as my focus is now shift towards swimming and want to become mor...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...nt to motivate many youngsters to learn swimming as it can help them in many ways. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75829383886 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7178762203 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4261564374 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274601743133 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954839501511 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732269227184 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148970176462 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104007335964 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.