Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
It is true that health issues have become common among the people in recent years due to a decrease in healthy activities. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences, societies can take some steps to mitigate this problem.
There are several reasons why people are affected by poor health. Firstly, most of the working people are career oriented, such as completing the assigned work in a stipulated time. So, they sit at one place for a longer time to complete the task. Secondly, some of them prefer to travel by short distance by cars or bikes. Lastly, they can be prone to obesity as most of them prefer to eat fast food than healthy food or a full meal.
There are several steps which can be taken by government, organizations or people themselves to overcome this problem. Employers could arrange health check-up for their staff on a monthly basis and also organizing health programmes for their employees will be an addon. Employers could also allow sufficient time and encourage their staff to have healthy and full meals. Government could encourage people to use bicycle for commuting short distance and also they could organize sports activities where most of them would like to participate.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise among people due to less physical activity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01321585903 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59182879649 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0227291227 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235389690669 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872667131455 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573229109215 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136908269067 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017646007321 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.