A motorway is ro be built near your house.as you think that will destroy areas of natural beauty.
Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter:
•express your views
•explain what damage will be caused
•suggesst alternative routes
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in regards to inform that I will be moving out from the apartment next month. Please consider this letter as the confirmation of the notice period.
I would like to thank you for extending all your help and support during my stay at your apartment during the past one year additionally it would have been extremely difficult staying in a foreign country without your help and guidance. As I had come to Sydney for pursuing a short term course at a local university and next month it is about to finish so I have to move back to India.
Since you would be looking for a new tenant, I would like to introduce you to my friend Jack who will also be arriving next month for an internship course and would immediately require an accommodation to stay.
I look forward to your response.
Warm wishes
Derrick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
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Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Hope you are doing well. I am writing in regards to inform that I will be moving out from t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nish so I have to move back to India. Since you would be looking for a new ten...
^^^^
Line 6, column 186, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...ip course and would immediately require an accommodation to stay. I look forward to your re...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ately require an accommodation to stay. I look forward to your response. Warm ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to your response. Warm wishes Derrick
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51467585875 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5898672508 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182705992204 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701850617169 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463913267913 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116000583456 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120067516593 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.