Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle in regards to inform you of problem caused by unavailability of parking space in the office building and would suggest a solution for your consideration. Let me explain in detail.
As you are aware most of the employees commute to office by their conveyance which they park at the road side as no parking space is available in the office premises. To elucidate parking along the roadside is insecure as many vehicles have been stolen in the past additionally some vehicles have been vandalized consequently many employees are commuting to office by public transport which is inefficient and uncomfortable mode of commutation.
Hence I would request you to arrange parking in the open space available at the front of the office with 24 hours security as it will ensure safety for the vehicles and prevent them from being vandalized by some miscreants. Such a move would be beneficial for the company as it will make transit for employees comfortable from their homes and would further increase the efficiency of manpower at work.
I hope my suggestion is taken into due consideration.
Yours sincerely
Ben
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this epistle in regards to ...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this epistle in regards to inform you of problem caused by unavail...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d uncomfortable mode of commutation. Hence I would request you to arrange parking ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nto due consideration. Yours sincerely Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03664921466 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92719324514 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3035678974 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.25 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206264766512 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876312084129 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517283992297 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100961767474 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689627524209 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.