You saw an advertisement for a skiing course in Canada but you have one or two problems and can’t stay for the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you that I had enrolled for a skiing course in Canada however I would not be able to stay for a whole course. Let me explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate I had read your advertisement in the local newspaper which provided two months of practical and theoretical training on skiing at a very attractive price during summer vacations. Additionally, the course also covered visa, lodging and boarding for international students moreover the training was to be given by famous skier James Button who has a great reputation in the industry hence I was interested to enrol for the course. Although I was looking forward to joining the camp in mid of may however due to an urgent assignment I will not be able to complete the full course as I would be busy on a project assignment during the whole summer. The project assignment was announced at a later stage and is very critical as it contributes marks to my bachelor's degree.
<span style="font-size:13.5pt;line-height:107%;
font-family:"Lucida Sans Unicode",sans-serif;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;
mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin;color:black;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;
mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">Lastly, I would like to find out if there is a refund possible at this stage as I am planning to cancel
my enrollment for the course.</span>
Looking forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely
Saad
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sans-serif
...t-family:"Lucida Sans Unicode",sans-serif;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri; mso-f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mediate response. Yours sincerely Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91627906977 4.54256449028 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.12501828429 2.54303337028 320% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.953479984 44.8134815571 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.0 76.5299724578 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 26.875 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220662583712 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967356062826 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739814254325 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825336641176 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839534154482 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 8.37731958763 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 70.7449484536 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 8.71597938144 199% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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