You saw an advertisement for a skiing course in Canada but you have one or two problems and can’t stay for the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the advert that it is published for the skiing course where in Canada next month.
There are several courses that are being arranged in Canada over the year, but I am interested in attending the skiing course. This course is on my bucket list since so long, and it is a good chance to tick it off with your specialists. When I booked the course with next cohort, I had not any commitment in work during the course period.
Recently, there are two significant reasons for not attending the complete course. Firstly, my company signed a contract with an important client in China, and I have been selected with the team who will travel to Beijing to review contract`s condition. Therefore, I won`t be able to attend the whole course sessions. Secondly, my Canadian visa will be expired a week before the end date of the course, and I must to travel out of the country before the expiration date.
I reviewed the course application, but there was no clause for the refund procedure. Therefore, I would ask that you address this case with the account department and advise me with the possibility for any refund.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 420, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...efore the end date of the course, and I must to travel out of the country before the ex...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80555555556 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63874268601 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9854626589 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276676871459 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10365183657 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437388913793 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136468745099 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515553548839 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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