Dear Sir,
My name is Dharmesh Gajera. I'm from Canada. Currently, I live in Saskatchewan city and want to transfer in other city Toronto for my job. So, I can not completed my running course.Which is attend by me before 3 week.
I am doing job in super mart mall as a post of purchase manager in Saskatchewan city, But my company has been transfer to me their main branch, which is located in torrent city as a same post of purchase manager. So, I tell you that I can not completed my current course, which is joined by me before 3 weeks. This is Account relevant Tally course.I want to release this course . In the second reason of my travel distance is very long about transfer from resident place to course location.
May I know that you give me some refund money ,which is paid by me there, where I haven't completed my course or may be possible to short duration or crash course. I hope that sir, you can help me or solve this matter for regarding to my both problems like time and money. Because without release my job , I can't be possible to completed my course . Ok , so I will be waiting for your prompt hopefully reply.
Thank you .
Yours faithfully
Dharmesh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ear Sir, My name is Dharmesh Gajera. Im from Canada. Currently, I live in Saska...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
Suggestion: complete
... city Toronto for my job. So, I can not completed my running course.Which is attend by me...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Which
..., I can not completed my running course.Which is attend by me before 3 week. I am ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., I can not completed my running course.Which is attend by me before 3 week. I am ...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attended'.
Suggestion: attended
...ot completed my running course.Which is attend by me before 3 week. I am doing job ...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...g course.Which is attend by me before 3 week. I am doing job in super mart mall a...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
Suggestion: complete
... manager. So, I tell you that I can not completed my current course, which is joined by m...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
.... This is Account relevant Tally course.I want to release this course . In the se...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lly course.I want to release this course . In the second reason of my travel dista...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... know that you give me some refund money ,which is paid by me there, where I haven...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ney ,which is paid by me there, where I havent completed my course or may be possible ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd money. Because without release my job , I cant be possible to completed my cour...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ney. Because without release my job , I cant be possible to completed my course . Ok...
^^^^
Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... cant be possible to completed my course . Ok , so I will be waiting for your prom...
^^
Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be possible to completed my course . Ok , so I will be waiting for your prompt ho...
^^
Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...your prompt hopefully reply. Thank you . Yours faithfully Dharmesh
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45833333333 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47086998874 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6532708172 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0769230769 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177058402793 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722734450019 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432697948149 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10927078099 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498435060537 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.