Dear Sir,
My name is Dharmesh Patel. I'm living in ahmedabad and I received your advertisement for volunteer work in your hospital. I know that your hospital need physiotherapist doctors, nurses and caring staff for patient. You need also cashier and accountant for your clinic.
Currently, I am doing job as a post of accountant for part time in Antique paints company. After received advertisement, I'm happy about that because of I also want to do social service for people. Actually, I cleared my MBA with main subject of account and I want to do more practice for making my career with this work. That's why, I do not want to given this chance.
Recently, my part time job is 8:00 am to 4:00 pm in my company. So, In evening time, I am free and wish to want to volunteer work for this hospital.
So, I hope that you would like to happy for choose to me social work regarding this job.
Regards
Dharmesh Patel
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Sir, My name is Dharmesh Patel. Im living in ahmedabad and I received your...
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Suggestion: part-time
...m doing job as a post of accountant for part time in Antique paints company. After receiv...
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Suggestion: I'm
... company. After received advertisement, Im happy about that because of I also want...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because I' instead.
Suggestion: because I
...ived advertisement, Im happy about that because of I also want to do social service for peop...
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Suggestion: That's
...ce for making my career with this work. Thats why, I do not want to given this chance...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...t to given this chance. Recently, my part time job is 8:00 am to 4:00 pm in my company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60843373494 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62206018115 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5203387466 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.75 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282503559676 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102191968213 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781011345817 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174411126143 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058224731524 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.