You saw an advertisement for a skiing course in Canada but you have one or two problems and can’t stay for the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the skiing course at Canada, which has been advertised day before yesterday and I found that it is 6 months class. Due to semester exam leave, I came here to aunt home at Canada where my nationality is India and my period of stay is 4 months.
I am an adventurous person and having an urge to equip myself with the new learning of skiing, thus I feel to join this course. Moreover, as my aunt family is fully committed towards work, I feel bored at home. Besides this, I need to make sure that I cannot complete full course successfully as i am joining back to college at India once my vacation over.
While enquiring further on the course fee, it was stated as 1000 Canadian dollar for 6 months. I would like to know whether any discounts or refunds will be made as I am not going to attend full six months study period.
I look forward to hearing from you about the further proceedings on the joining process and hope to get positive reply for reduction in course payment too. Thank in advance.
Your Faithfully
Sakthi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 297, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ot complete full course successfully as i am joining back to college at India onc...
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Line 13, column 75, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...rse fee, it was stated as 1000 Canadian dollar for 6 months. I would like to know whet...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, moreover, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68316831683 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80242185932 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678217821782 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5060602323 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176679386371 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720196216661 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047816418895 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100074943344 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302007326524 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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