Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concerns of not having a parking space in the office building. This is a worrisome situation for many of use personal automobiles to commute to work.
Let me elaborate the situation in detail. Non availability of a space for parking implies that we have to paid parking services. Unfortunately, the paid parking services charge exorbitant amount and creates a hole in the pockets of the employees who avail such services. Interestingly, the closest transit to any public transport system is about three kilometers away from the office. Moreover, those of us who use the public transport system not only have to plan our day well in advance but also take on the arduous walk to the office. Tired and disgruntled employees will not be able to give their best at work.
Would you kindly make alternate parking space available in the vicinity of the office and write to 'Smart Bikes' to provide pickup and drop-off points from the office to the closest transit points. This crucial last leg connectivity would help many employees who opt for public transport and make their commute to work easy, fast, and eco-friendly.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Rajie
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00970873786 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75368971575 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606796116505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7515735936 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165259398814 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063452316938 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520159405907 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944102425765 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156170995062 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.