Dear Sara,
I just received your mail about the difficulties that you are facing at work. I am really sorry to know that your new boss is giving you a hard time.
After I gave birth to my son last year, when I got back to work, I had a hard time too. It was not easy to deal with the changes in the organization and take care of my son at home. Sometimes, it is hard to maintain a work life balance, especially for a nursing mother. At that time, my boss was not aware of my situation at home and was quite inflexible about working from home.
However, I have learnt from my experience. All women can avail an extended maternity leave for a year or go on a sabbatical for two years. Developmental Psychologists and doctors suggest that it is crucial for a mother to attend to the child in their early years. To transition smoothly for a new mother to get back to their careers lot of companies have introduced work from home and flexible work schedules. I suggest, you talk to the Human Resources department and avail these options. Also, suggest you have a discussion with your new boss about your suggestion and explore a solution that works best for you and the boss.
I hope you find my suggestions useful. I cannot wait to come and visit the little one this summer.
Love,
Rajie
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42083333333 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52899505184 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5093727846 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7857142857 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230293213376 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769946606158 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810610785692 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150911979876 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875677044995 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.