Dear Sara,
It has been a long time since we have been in touch. I am guilty of not being able to write to you for so long.
I was recently promoted as a manager and the work has been keeping me busy. To be honest, I am finding the work quite stressful.
This morning, I saw and advertisement in the news paper that read about a holiday package for two to Goa. The package offers an irresistible discount of seventy percent off on airline tickets. I know that you are doing some research about the influence of colonization in Goa for your thesis. I was wondering if you might be interested in joining for a holiday to Goa?
There is a visit to a typical Goan village and a home stay, where you can enjoy some Goan fish curries.
Also, there is a a guided tour to some historical churches. Apparently, the guide is an architect and has made extensive study about the influence of Portuguese architecture in the churches.
I think this would be a great get away for both of us to spend some quality time at the beaches, soak in the sun, and do some fishing as well. I am really looking forward to this holiday. Cannot wait to catch up!!!
Love,
Rajie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...e home made delicacies. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the famous churc...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e home made delicacies. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the famous chu...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...e home made delicacies. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the famous churc...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ies. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the famous churches in Goa. Apparently, the...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...really looking forward to this holiday. Cant wait to catch up!!! Love, Rajie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, look, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50733639595 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7629131703 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0714285714 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125887068493 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439844133711 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661989827858 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486596252322 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618307253338 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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