Severe punishment for traffic offences is a debatable topic. Some say that the traffic offences are not as severe as criminal offences and hence traffic offenders should not be punished. I completely agree that negligent driving calls for imprisonment.
Firstly, we all know the effects that alcohol has on our body and mind. Despite the rule imposed by the government to not drive under the influence of alcohol many youngsters do not take the rule seriously. For example, a celebrity in India was exempt from a criminal charge despite killing four destitute who were sleeping on a pavement.The pain and the agony of the family who lost their members is miserable. The law that has a loop hole in the judicial system to not be charged as guilty is ineffective law. Such rules only favor the rich and affluent. If only the law for drunken driving was stringent, the family would not feel deprived of justice.
Secondly, there is a reason why young children are prohibited from driving automobiles. However, some parents encourage children below the age of eighteen years to ride motor bikes and scooters. For example, many garages employee children over the age of fourteen years, because of cheap labor costs. These children test drive the motor bikes that they repaired in the streets and risk the lives of others in the road. As children, do not understand the repercussions of reckless driving, they ride the bikes at high speeds, which might result in accidents. The insurance companies do not compensate a victim for an accident that was caused by an underage driver.
In conclusion, although there are rules and restrictions on driving automobiles, in my opinion, unless the punishment for traffic offenses do not get stricter it is difficult to ensure the safety of motorists and pedestrians on the roads.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'garages'' or 'garage's'?
Suggestion: garages'; garage's
...r bikes and scooters. For example, many garages employee children over the age of fourt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01650165017 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7158247195 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7752738972 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171356176162 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527613870117 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568272280837 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117705256592 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070541268408 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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