you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Matt,
Hope you are doing well. First of all, I would like to thank you for the amazing company during our trip to your home town Manali. I am still in trance with the exotic valleys, mesmerizing mountains and the panoramic views of the lake. I can say that it was one of the alluring experiences I had in a while. Now I feel energized and rejuvenated.
I have reached back safely to Jaipur today but when I reached home I realized that I had forgotten my wallet at your house. If I remember correctly I have kept it on the cabinet in the drawing room. The wallet contains some cash, credit card and most importantly my student ID card which I need while entering the university gates hence without it my life will become miserable.
Lastly, I would request you to send me the wallet as soon as possible through a speed post at my mailing address.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Matt, Hope you are doing well. First of all, I...
^^^
Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... had forgotten my wallet at your house. If I remember correctly I have kept it on ...
^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse and seeing you soon. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, lastly, look, so, still, well, while, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45348837209 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42691996332 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.009089991 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6363636364 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287571724271 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888064416796 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849372014072 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170165157093 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416492941206 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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