You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:
- What repairs are you going to do?
- How will it affect the restaurant?
- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you of the repair and maintenance works to be carried in my house which might affect the business and operations of your restaurant. Let me explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate I have recently purchased a villa next to your restaurant from the previous owner and would like to carry out some repair works as I will be moving in next week. Although it is a brand new house however it requires major repair works as some of the outer walls have huge cracks. Additionally, we need to build a soakage pit in the front portion of the house as the previous soakage pit has been damaged. For your information, the repair works will block the front entrance of the restaurant for a few hours. Furthermore, the noise created by the maintenance may also cause disturbance to the customers who would be dining at your restaurant.
Lastly, in order to minimize the impact on your daily operations, I would request you to close the front gate and ask your customers to come from the back gate as it will reduce the inconvenience caused.
I look forward to your cooperation in this matter.
Yours Sincerely
Saad
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...wever it requires major repair works as some of the outer walls have huge cracks. Additiona...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ration in this matter. Yours Sincerely Saad
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Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in this matter. Yours Sincerely Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, lastly, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69756097561 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68217284306 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570731707317 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8611926485 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255682885737 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892433862512 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802376129745 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118894195917 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730948395494 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.