You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:- What repairs are you going to do?- How will it affect the restaurant?- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.

Essay topics:

You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:
- What repairs are you going to do?
- How will it affect the restaurant?
- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in reference to tell you that some repair and maintenance work will be done out from coming week in my house which is next to your restaurant.

To explain in total, the underground water tank that is in front yard of my bungalow is damaged and need to be repaired. The spot of tanker is in the way of your hotel entrance which will affect your customers. Moreover, construction material like cement and iron will also be placed near to road in front.

you are requested to please close the front door and open your back door for your customers easiness and comfortability. The construction work will be carried out only for two days. Therefor, please cooperate with us to get this done in best possible time frame.

Looking forward to here from you.

Yours Sincerely,

Charlie Metu

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...lso be placed near to road in front. you are requested to please close the front...
^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... out only for two days. Therefor, please cooperate with us to get this done in be...
^^
Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...ase cooperate with us to get this done in best possible time frame. Looking forward...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76551724138 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54720942643 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3482291879 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7777777778 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1728641704 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648278809791 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558730766866 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106148871833 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514882129929 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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