You are going to have a business trip and arrange your friend to look after your children. Write a letter to the friend, tn your letter, you should:
• tell him/her which kind of food your children tike and dislike
• tell him/her which kind of activities your children can attend
• tell him/her the time you will pick up your children
Dear Mike,
I am writing this letter to tell you that I will be on a business trip for a week therefore give me favour to look after my child in the mean time.
I will leave him to your home tomorrow morning as my flight will leave from Chandigarh airport sharp at 10:00 am. Aman is very fond of sweet foods, therefore do not give him any type o sweets like chocolates and candy as our family doctor had also advised to do so. Moreover, you have to pick and drop him from Planet F as he is having judo classes over there in the evenings sharp at 7:00 PM everyday.
Apart from this, Please tell your daughter to help in his incomplete homework which he will get daily from his school. I will be here on next saturday morning and will try to pick my child from your home by afternoon as after arriving here ,Firstly I have to visit my office for a presentation.
Thanks for your king help in advance.
Yours Lovingly,
Charlie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... there in the evenings sharp at 7:00 PM everyday. Apart from this, Please tell your d...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...home by afternoon as after arriving here ,Firstly I have to visit my office for a ...
^^
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n advance. Yours Lovingly, Charlie
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, moreover, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32768361582 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2265335305 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649717514124 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8047717397 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222839443136 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104956645095 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442011994729 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130297389762 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251567171434 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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