Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
write a letter to Mrs. barrettes
your letter suggest how you could help her in her home
Say why you would like to do this work
Explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the advertised position for the upcoming summer. Firstly, I am a multi-skilled personality to look after many things at a time despite busy schedules such as taking notes while listening to others. In addition, assisting others while focusing on daily work. Furthermore, I can also take care of the gardening work at 6pm.
Undoubtedly, I am coming from a poor family and this job can help me to come out of all my debts. On the other side, I need to pay my school fees which cost me an arm and a leg. Hence, this job is much required in all ways.
As I explained, I am excited to accept the work right from August first week onwards as I am going to complete my final year exams. Nevertheless, it is very hard to join in July due to critical project work which I am doing at a well-reputed company in the town.
I look forward to hearing your response with the good news about my joining date. Hope it will come. I would really appreciate it if you could let me know if any additional information is required from my end.
Best Regards,
Lakshmi.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45673076923 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6409901471 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663461538462 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1045969712 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3076923077 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 4.34317383033 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089093352353 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288787745828 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559442903154 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410428692488 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239813614476 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.