Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter:
• suggest how you could help her in her home
• say why you would like to do this work
• explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I came across an advertisement published by you in local newspaper for some help in daily chores in your home in the next summer season. I am very much interested in this opportunity and willing to apply for the same. From cleaning dishes, watering plants, organizing your house to helping with cooking, I can be of help in all these household activities.
The major reason that I am looking forward for this job is that I have a summer break and I am willing to contribute in my college fees payment, hoping that it will reduce some burden from my parents shoulders. Also, since I always help my mother with these things, I am sure I will not let you down.
Additionally, since I am also looking out for an internship in a technology-based company, I might be available after 4 pm on working days i.e. from Monday to Friday. While I can accommodate more hours in the morning as well on weekends i.e. on Saturday’s and Sunday’s.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Kind Regards,
Shaheed Pathan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Kind Regards, Shaheed Pathan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70165745856 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80723880808 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2468141448 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192305378192 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749024076483 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087986644124 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978474074568 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069713042896 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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