A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter:
1. Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum.
2. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful.
3. Give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest for part time role available in your museum as volunteer.
As I am an arts student. I have so much curiosity on historical sites and it is also relevant to my studies, However in my curriculum I am supposed to do unpaid internship, which would be really helpful for my overall grade and also i can enrich my knowledge. On top that, I live close to the museum.
With regards to skills and qualities, I am a multi linguistic, well organised and easy going person. Apart from this i have good communication skills, where I can be suitable for tour guide. Consequently, I always prioritised the tasks which are assigned
Since i am a student, I can work on weekends that is Saturday and Sunday from 10am to 5pm.I would be grateful if you would give me opportunity.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Faithfully,
James Shark
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...I am writing to express my interest for part time role available in your museum as volunt...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ailable in your museum as volunteer. As I am an arts student. I have so much cu...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
...your museum as volunteer. As I am an arts student. I have so much curiosity on hi...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nship, which would be really helpful for my overall grade and also i can enrich m...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... helpful for my overall grade and also i can enrich my knowledge. On top that, I...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prioritised the tasks which are assigned Since i am a student, I can work on week...
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the tasks which are assigned Since i am a student, I can work on weekends th...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...is Saturday and Sunday from 10am to 5pm.I would be grateful if you would give me ...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...d give me opportunity. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours Faithfully, James S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, really, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67924528302 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80577873115 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691823899371 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1856197173 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19919538097 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716527044939 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538142627899 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107748755406 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060395578174 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.