Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In these days, increasing number of tourists are travelling to the places which are terrible in conditions such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctica because to enjoy their rest of days. This eassy will put forth both positive and negative shades with suitable illustrations.
On one hand, there are many advantages that why tourists are visiting to the place which are severe in conditions. Firstly, to enjoy the beauty of nature, which is unique. One good example would be the Dudhsagar falls, where the water rush seems to be the milky in colour and it is completely surrounded by giant mountains and breath-taking views. Secondly, visitors wants to experience adrenalin rush. The Sahara desert for instance, which has unusual landforms and rocky stones, where pupils are aware about the danger but also want to experience the joy.
On another hand, there are also bad side if the people travels in these places mainly safety comes first. For example if any problem arises there will be no rescue team to take medical attention. Another aspect is climatic conditions in places like antartic for instance, freezing cold which deteriorates human health and chance of swelling in body which may even leads to death.Finally,the animals are getting disturbed because of continuous human activity.
To sum up, Travelling to the places with extreme conditions are risky equally gives immense joy and knowledge. Still people should take precautionary measures to accomplish.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: milky
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2447257384 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72283028626 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637130801688 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8433139308 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.583333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200639424672 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619001111969 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712073374278 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111286344802 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406726336674 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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