One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.
Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter
give your opinion of your friend's business idea
tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer
and explain your reasons for this decision.
Dear John,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. I am writing in regard to the recent offer you made me to join your new business entity. First of all i would like to thankyou from bottom of my heart for the recent offer that you have made.
I have reviewed your business proposal to setup a new power plant from the household waste and it is quite impressive. However, i think it needs some modification in the following areas, In the proposed plan, there was no entries related to the health and safety measures that we need to follow and at the same time the Finance section, you need to update the operational costs levy as per the new rule passed by the ruling government yesterday. In addition to this, we should make some additional ground work in bringing up systematic investment plan for third party personnel.
I am pretty much impressed with your project plan and cannot wait long to collaborate with you. Joining a start up company as a business partner is a quite challenging task, where i feel lucky to be part of it. At this same time my childhood dream to be an entrepreneur will be getting true once we start our company.
Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... your new business entity. First of all i would like to thankyou from bottom of m...
^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
... I have reviewed your business proposal to setup a new power plant from the household wa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...te and it is quite impressive. However, i think it needs some modification in the...
^
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: groundwork
...to this, we should make some additional ground work in bringing up systematic investment pl...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tner is a quite challenging task, where i feel lucky to be part of it. At this sa...
^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...time and consideration. Looking forward to hear from you at the earliest. Yours sincer...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, third, i feel, i think, in addition, first of all, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55793991416 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51710060685 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635193133047 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7548260895 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6923076923 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265015240037 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110793826055 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764123846462 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167048876343 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624419277899 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.