One of your pen friends wants to improve their English at a language school. they have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your pen friend. advise them about the following

Hi John
I noticed that you are having some problems looking for a english school, I'm going to give you some advice of my personal experience .

As you know, I have been studying in an idiom center for 1 year , the name of the institution is UAS ( Universidad Autónoma de Sinaloa). Let me tell you that i have felt really comfortable in the way that the classes are given and in only one year studying I have reached the advance level and I can have a good conversation with a native english speaker.

The classes are perfect, you only have to go once a week on Saturday for 5 hours. The teachers are native speakers of different nationalities, so your skills will be well prepared because of this. However, the cost is quite expensive about 50 dollars per class but I could tell you that is 100 % recommend.

I hope you're interested in my recommendation and take the best decision.

Best wishes

Jaime Montesinos

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John I noticed that you are having some probl...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ou are having some problems looking for a english school, Im going to give you so...
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Suggestion: I'm
... problems looking for a english school, Im going to give you some advice of my per...
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...ou some advice of my personal experience . As you know, I have been studying in...
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...n studying in an idiom center for 1 year , the name of the institution is UAS Uni...
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...ear , the name of the institution is UAS Universidad Autónoma de Sinaloa. Let me ...
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... you that is 100 % recommend. I hope youre interested in my recommendation and tak...
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Suggestion:
...d take the best decision. Best wishes Jaime Montesinos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64024390244 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73019747839 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1450800651 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181025955533 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676653660264 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440937961986 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103814047917 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293687217903 0.0580467560999 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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