It is said that media entertainment provides high salaries. People say that a successful person on Television earns high amount of money and I tend to agree with those opinions. However I believe that exist other important jobs that should be well paid as well.
Most people spend their time watching television and using social media and ending up being a big fan of singers, movie actors and comedians. These types of artists invest their time in what people like. As a result of this, they become millionaires because of their talents and their beautiful faces that make people love them .
Nevertheless, I believe that there might be other types of jobs that should be well paid like artists. For example, elementary school teachers are in charge of the education of the bases of every person around the globe and governments should invest more money in their salaries. Also Doctors, they have a incredible responsibility in people life and thousand of them are not in wealthy conditions.
In conclusion, fame is one of the best ways to become a wealthy person and wanted by millions of people. Nonotheless I consider that other significant jobs like teachers and doctor must be in the same level of salary because of their important functions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92890995261 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65181614587 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587677725118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3116489869 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226451881433 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086909722339 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749788656078 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140489947127 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814716195523 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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