ou are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I would like to thank you for offering me job at your prestigious organisation. I am writing to inform, due to unforeseen circumstances it will be difficult for me to join office from Monday dated 23rd November, 2018.
Let me explain you about my problem. Last month my grandmother went through a heart surgery, in last few days her condition has again become serious. One of my uncle has consulted doctor and they have asked us to reach her place soon. As our family had already planned a trip to visit grandmother, in order to give her surprise as it's birthday as well.
Therefore, it is requested to please accept my excuse and give me a waiver for a week. I will be able to join office from 30th November, 2018. Moreover, I am also attaching acceptance letter and other relevant documents.
Thanks
Yours Sincerely
Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e job at your prestigious organisation. I am writing to inform, due to unforeseen...
^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2018'.
Suggestion: November 2018
...e to join office from Monday dated 23rd November, 2018. Let me explain you about my probl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from Monday dated 23rd November, 2018. Let me explain you about my problem. Las...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2018'.
Suggestion: November 2018
...I will be able to join office from 30th November, 2018. Moreover, I am also attaching acceptan...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73885350318 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66624234254 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707006369427 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0083966234 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6363636364 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21263072907 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769094969729 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604920731596 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12271873334 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668517221962 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.