Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Punishment for any sort of crime plays a vital role to build peace, law and order in the society. In few cases capital punishment is an important aspect to create a sense of security and decrease violence. This essay will argue why capital punishment is completely necessary to maintain better law and order situation.

Capital punishment as per few Nongovernmental organisations is said to be a harsh punishment, as they believe that we shouldn’t be taking anyone’s life. They believe that a chance should be given to an individual to improve himself. As by doing this and individual can play his part in the betterment of society can be role model. A survey was conducted by a renowned Non-governmental organisation, finding of that survey concluded, that people agreed to give at least a chance to change their lives. As per research it can be said that without capital punishment crimes and violence can be reduced.

However, there are different organisations and state departments in our country that believe in capital punishment to be an important aspect, in order to maintain law and order situation. As this creates a sense of fear amongst criminals and in future other criminals avoid committing violent crimes. A survey was conducted amongst group of criminals regarding type of punishment’s they feared most; the findings concluded capital punishment to be the most fearful one. Capital punishment plays a vital role in maintaining balance, reduce violent crimes in society. It can be said that, capital punishment is one of the best tools against criminals that indulge in serious crimes.

It is important to maintain capital punishments, as this helps to maintain a sense of fear amongst criminals and on the other hand a sense of security amongst citizens. This essay argued about the impact capital punishment has in our society.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, at least, sort of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17821782178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06083503779 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471947194719 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5456183724 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261377904337 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10651543859 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695961130318 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178889299306 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280721803603 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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