Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time, and that they should read only serious educational books.
What is your opinion about this?
Books, play an important role in building character of children. They provide with an opportunity to increase vocabulary and get knowledge about different things. There is a mix opinion about what sort of books children should read; few people believe they should only focus on educational and course books, while others believe children should be allowed to read whatever books they want to. This essay will discuss the importance of reading books, which are not related to course and how they contribute.
These days methods of teaching and learning have changed as compared to past. But, course books haven't changed much, they are still same.However, in order to be competitive in today's world every child needs to adapt to changes, that are happening around him. Focusing only on course books will only provide limited knowledge, which is nothing as compared with the standards and quality of knowledge, an individual can collect by reading entertainment books.
Moreover, entertainment books provide an opportunity to relax and spend time with yourselves. As, every individual gets tired with reading course related stuff. There are different methods for children to relax; some prefer playing sports, while some prefer reading entertainment books. Reading books help you to divert your mind from daily routine. However, at this point it is important for parents to encourage their children to read variety of books, as long as they are reading books they shouldn't be worried about it.
In my opinion, reading books is a good habit. As, this helps children to improve their vocabulary and increase reading speed as well. Reading entertainment books provide with an opportunity to increase knowledge about different subjects. Therefore, parents should encourage their children to read books and give freedom to their children to read whatever they want to read.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33445945946 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61067782312 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510135135135 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2769069475 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492929474566 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164646378028 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135223394924 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323196310225 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124063386438 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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