In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good, while others believe this is a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
World's population is increasing in large proportion. Age group and demographics have been changing with time. In many countries, there have been number of people, who are becoming part of senior citizen's club. Few believe it to be good thing, as life expectation is increasing; while on the other hand, few believe it to be a burden on economic activity of the country.
There has been increase in number of older people in developed countries. This is due to health facilities and quality of food they intake. There are people who believe, increasing number of older people is a good sign, as elder people are highly experienced and can guide people through severe times. Moreover, they are well aware of the changes which occur on numerous occasions. Therefore, they can help young people and motivate them. They are believed to be an asset for any country.
While on the other hand, increasing number of older people is seen as a burden for economic activity. They tend to contribute less or in few case their contribution is almost zero. In developed nations, they are dependent upon government institutions to take care of them, while in developing and under developed nations, they act as a burden on their children. This causes the overall economic activity to slow down, as spending on different items is reduced and the funds are re-allocated towards covering medical and basic facilities.
In my opinion, it is very important to maintain a balance in population between older age and younger age. By maintaining a balance, governments and other institutions can focus easily on taking care of elderly people.Therefore, for any nation to prosper and grow economically, it is important to keep a balance between age demographics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, therefore, well, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04513888889 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89565638615 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1617585917 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209357587749 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645537648566 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567731321222 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116610096014 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444236742036 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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