You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
– what was the item
– why it was important that you get it immediately
– what you suggest the company should do now
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, I had ordered a cricket kit, which was supposed to be delivered by a local courier company. However, it hasn't been delivered yet. As, it is very crucial, because it is needed for upcoming matches.
Let me explain you in detail. It is apprised that, an important tournament is scheduled to start from tomorrow and I have a major responsibility in my team. Moreover, we were supposed to practice with the items, which were to be delivered yesterday. I had opted for this kit due to the faster delivery and availability of items in same city. Also, on numerous occasions, I have tried to track the items, but I have been misinformed by your representatives.
Furthermore, it seems like this situation has occurred due to non professional attitude of staff and has turned out to become a nuisance for me. Therefore, it is requested to kindly fix it and try to send the order, at your earliest. So, these items are utilised within time.
Regards,
Alan Border
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...by a local courier company. However, it hasnt been delivered yet. As, it is very cruc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79661016949 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86837666041 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7376493374 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3076923077 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193078507653 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568990060077 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391006881198 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121224608694 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484022687909 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.