For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
give details on how you have benefited from the club
explain why you want to leave
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in connection to my membership with “NEXT”. Although it has been very fruitful for my professional journey, I would like to end this relationship with the club.
I have been a part of this club since 2019, but recently upgraded myself into the gold tier. Under this category, I have received additional benefits such as a directory of email addresses of potential employers. Moreover, I am pleased with the fees for this which is $250 per annum.
This club has been very helpful for my professional growth trajectory and has helped me meet a number of important human resourse managers in my industry. I also learned what training and additional education will help me succeed in the field.
Since I have now found a new job, I would like to cancel my membership with the club. As per the contract, I am informing you of my intentions my mail and am ready to pay the charges for cancellation. Additionally, I am available for mentoring other job seekers pro-bono.
I look forward to receiving your positive revert, along with information regarding refund of the pending membership fees.
Yours sincerely
Karishma Dave
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...tion will help me succeed in the field. Since I have now found a new job, I woul...
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...r mentoring other job seekers pro-bono. I look forward to receiving your positiv...
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... refund of the pending membership fees. Yours sincerely Karishma Dave
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...ng membership fees. Yours sincerely Karishma Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97959183673 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91965149427 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2264600787 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23360466523 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789510186172 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402837370926 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1136713085 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457149236447 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.