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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What

can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

With the advent of cheaper production due to technological advancements, a new trend of quick replacements is on the rise. This, moreover, is leading to a drastic increase in the waste generated across the landfills. This essay will highlight the notable reasons for this occurreance and suggest some possible solutions that government bodies can incorporate to resolve this situation.

People have seen a growth in the rubbish that is getting collected daily and there are two significant causes of this increase. The predominant reasoning is relalted to affordable electronic devices. Over the years, we have seen a growth in the usage of phones, tablets, and computers , which has driven their manufacturing companies to match the demand by launching cheaper models at regular intervals. This results into the consumers replacing their existing electronics rather frequently. The older versions are, therefore, discarded and end up in the rubbish pile. Another serious reason for this rise in waste products is due to the growing craze of fast fashion. In other words, more and more individuals are opting for low priced clothes irrespective of the quality as they do not plan to wear it for a long time and eventually reach the dumping grounds. A case in point is the online clothing store called Shien, they sell garments for as low as $5 with no shipping cost. Since it barely pinches the customer’s pocket, these items are worn once or twice and then thrown away.

However, there are some strategic moves that the government can undertake to reduce the amount of waste products. To start with, the authorities can order these electronic companies to gather these older versions and reuse its workable parts to reduce the waste. They can, furthermore, place strict guidelines on the reuse and recycle requirements with serious punishments. Additionally, the government can encourage the citizens to give their old clothes to the less fortunate by conducting donation drives across cities. They can also give incentives to people who submit receipts from thrift stores such as goodwill or salvation army. This will indirectly help reduce the amount of rubbish that ends up in the landfills and instead be used for a good cause.

In conclulsion, although a higher number of rubbish is getting produced now-a-days, simple steps from the authorities such as asking the companies to reuse older parts and push recycling of old clothes in the way of donation can drastically improve the situation in the future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as, in other words, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24384236453 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81244046502 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583743842365 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0033070284 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.052631579 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220218272108 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054021523443 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048453523159 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115781648047 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282081499738 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as, in other words, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments