People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter describe the problems.- a explain how they are affecting people?- a say what the company should do to help

Essay topics:

People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter describe the problems.
- a explain how they are affecting people?
- a say what the company should do to help.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing a letter in connection with the internet problems which create numerous obstacles on the way of daily life.
First of all, I have been using the internet connection of your company since 2014. I had not faced any sort of problem from your side earlier. But unfortunately, the internet speed becomes slow from the last couple of weeks. Sometimes, we lost the connection as it shows network error on our electronic gadgets. In addition, people of my street face similar hindrance from last two weeks. Due to this, one cannot watch videos without buffering and do video calls with their kith and kin. What is more, It also puts a negative impact on the education of learners indeed.

Furthermore, the company should have to send a technical team to check the internet pace and sort out aforesaid problems at the earliest possible so that every individual get speed according to their plan.

I expect immediate action to be taken from your side to resolve these issues.

Yours Sincerely,
Harrie

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, in addition, sort of, first of all, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91477272727 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53523083819 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710227272727 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5767978784 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254498143194 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787203720627 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531893138407 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128472351089 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486248600427 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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