All education, primary, secondary and further education should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
This is a universally acknowledged fact that education plays a prominent role to build up a career in everybody's life. It is believed that it should be free of cost to all individuals while other refute this thought. These points of view will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
It has always been regarded that some people cannot afford the cost of education. It may have a negative effect on some children as well. For instance, In India, there are some children who cannot go to school because their parents have no enough money to pay education fees. Thus, it definitely enhances the illiterate rate to great extent. Also, it has a negative effect on nation economy indeed. Additionally, people pay a large amount of money in the form of various taxes like Income tax. Therefore, the regime should provide free education to their citizens so that parents can utilize money for some other purpose.
However, some argue that it should be free mere up to secondary level. There are some other major issues like pollution and employment so the government has also need to pay intention on these matters. Inclusively, in colleges, the government has to pay salary to staff members, maintenance expenses which may be difficult without getting fee from learners. In addition, it declines the standard of education which has more major consequences. That is why some people gravitate towards this point of view.
After analyzing the aforesaid points, it has been proven that all schooling up to secondary should be complimentary. Obviously, it helps to improve the literacy rate of a nation. However, there should be a minimal charge on university such as tuition fees. Ideally, there should be a provision of scholarship for improvement in education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07560137457 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80756224053 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7180658002 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7368421053 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238679591363 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069848509812 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675749253507 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150543856258 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482402672589 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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