Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant places to live and work in. For this reason, private cars should be completely banned from city centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This is a universally acknowledged fact that traffic congestion becomes the major problem throughout the world. It is believed that private cars should be banned in the city centres to sort out the aforesaid problem. However, I completely disagree with this point of view. These points of view will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, everybody has the right to drive his own car. They usually spend some amount of money to buy cars to get privacy. For instance, if government pass such law then it may decline the privacy of the individual to great extent. So, it has unavoidable consequences for people who have purchased cars. Therefore, it is apparent that government should not implement this thought besides they have to provide well-equipped public transport so people can try to use buses, trains, streetcars whenever it is possible to them. That is why some people gravitate towards this point of view.
Also, if people know that they cannot use their cars to reach their desired destination then obviously they would not spend money on buying cars. Thus, it may have an effect on the economy of the nation. In Addition, the employment rate will be boomed swiftly because of the lack of an automobile industry. what is more, individuals have to need to use their cars it case of a medical emergency to reach the hospital whether they live in the heart of a city.
After analyzing the aforesaid points, it has been proved that government should not follow this thought as it has various disadvantages. Ideally, they can encourage to individuals for public transport to sort out such major problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70963020868 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6097752803 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173234755089 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551784021572 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540964286515 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104124214874 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067008697776 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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