On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterdescribe the item you lostexplain how you lost ittell the insu

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing a letter in regards to my mobile phone which I have lost during my last trip to London.
To begin with, Last week, I went to London to utilize my leisure time for a couple of weeks. But unfortunately, I lost my mobile phone which was made an Apple company. The model of such phone was 6s plus and I bought it during the month of November. Inclusively, I remember it was in my pocket when I took a flight from Heathrow Airport to coming back to Canada. But, When I arrived at Toronto Pearson airport then I realized it has been slipped from my pocket. After that, immediately, I made an inquiry but I got late.

Given the circumstances, I would like to get a compensation for my valuable electronic gadgets as I have a bill of purchase and travel insurance receipt as well.

I would be grateful if you give your immediate attention to this matter.

Yours Sincerely,
Harrie

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ear Sir/Madam, I am writing a letter in regards to my mobile phone which I have lost durin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53614457831 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72864968517 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3084975608 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139246394402 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519095969106 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546091798172 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947570418526 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443028732258 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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