People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection.
In your letter
describe the problems
explain how they are affecting people
say what the company should do to help
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my discontent with the internet connection that your company provides in our area. The disruptive internet connection is causing a great problem for us and I am hoping you would resolve it as soon as possible.
Your company is supposed to provide technology that guarantees an uninterrupted internet connection. However, this does not seem to be the case. For the last couple of weeks, we are experiencing extremely slow connectivity and sometimes the internet is totally unreachable. During peak hours, the internet speed is as slow as a few KB per second only.
Many people in our area, including my husband, work from home and a disruptive internet connection means they are unable to work. Due to poor connectivity, they can’t send finished assignments to their clients on time. Frequent disconnections also affect people who do video conferencing online. Besides, we are often unable to do online shopping, send important emails and pay utility bills online.
I expected that the situation will be dealt with the highest importance without any delay. Please send your staff to come over and check if you need to install new cables since they might be fairly old. Take any other measure necessary to resolve the slow connectivity.
Expecting a prompt resolution from you.
Yours faithfully,
Shima Momtazi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27927927928 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8853452322 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684684684685 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8814470604 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238396381125 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673075991113 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721109543425 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100577207802 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675664498974 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.