Question Your friend is an expert in international food and is going to publish a book soon Write a letter to him describing a special dish from your country In your letter you should describe a special dish from your country explain what season people pr

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Question: Your friend is an expert in international food and is going to publish a book soon. Write a letter to him describing a special dish from your country. In your letter you should:

• describe a special dish from your country
• explain what season people prefer to eat it in
• say why your friend should include this dish in his book

Dear Anthony,

How are you? I am writing a letter to you because I've heard that you are one of the best international food expertise right now. I just want to propose to you one of the special cuisine here in our country.

By the way, this dish is what we call here in Philippines ''PORK HUMBA''. A lot of Filipinos love to eat this and also one of the special food to be served every time we celebrated a fiesta. I got happy and excited every time my mother cook this certain dish because aside from i really like it this is also one of my favorite. I can assure you that a lot of people want to try it most especially when they are preparing for a birthday, it is best to serve. The reason why I choose to present to you this food because it is very delicious and I know many of you clients love to eat this also. I am assuring you that even you, if you can try this, you can really say that 'it really taste good''. That is really true. I am looking forward for you reply and I hope to see you soon and present it to you personally. I am very much happy knowing you and all of us here were so proud of what you've achieved right now. Take care always and God bless.

Yours sincerely,
Darl Regine B. Nermal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Anthony, How are you? I am writing a letter to yo...
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Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ow many of you clients love to eat this also. I am assuring you that even you, if yo...
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Line 5, column 708, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tastes'?
Suggestion: tastes
...you can really say that 'it really taste good''. That is really true. ...
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Line 5, column 960, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'care'.
Suggestion: always care
...at you've achieved right now. Take care always and God bless. Yours sincerely, Dar...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'by the way']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.162629757785 0.220444632235 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.159169550173 0.167888034529 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0553633217993 0.0606518309736 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0865051903114 0.0506257000042 171% => OK
Pronouns: 0.138408304498 0.118615021944 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0865051903114 0.107062808482 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0173010380623 0.041066498444 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66047918257 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0415224913495 0.0385302599488 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0726643598616 0.0714148451538 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0103806228374 0.0191574576366 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138408304498 0.00930345855455 149% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1264.0 1141.60824742 111% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.134020619 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24481327801 5.53046319177 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78085437643 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.228215767635 0.284621296913 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.161825726141 0.211203875043 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0912863070539 0.133321485273 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0705394190871 0.0843313296314 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66047918257 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535269709544 0.622163163488 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.8270728952 62.8969750728 81% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2142857143 16.4300151701 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2961612594 44.7399317507 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 90.9928171075 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.4300151701 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.613754768223 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.09278350515 191% => OK
Readability: 33.3968583284 37.5504026743 89% => OK
Elegance: 0.693693693694 1.13073093955 61% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210594868747 0.331212695627 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133035605526 0.0927372745006 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0855471426117 0.0736520305886 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493154580133 0.579516596996 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.219508634828 0.180689518051 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848126534427 0.122183219658 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528672026845 0.0765303033291 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232956159275 0.211926503985 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.232956159275 0.0737400523855 316% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124365428396 0.203819188451 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880093582222 0.067151250289 131% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.45360824742 174% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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