On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/ Madam,
This letter is in connection with the travel insurance I purchased with your company for my recent trip
to Mumbai, India where I misplaced my camera and its supporting equipment.
This unfortunate incident occurred while I was traveling to Mumbai for work in the first week of May.
Since I am a photographer, I was there for a work assignment and had carried my camera along with two
extra lenses. During this time, I lost my bag which consisted of a Canon D1120 camera and its charger of
the same brand. Moreover, the device was brand new and was purchased only recently for this trip. The
total cost of these is around $950 excluding taxes.
I was travelling by the local train to visit the Gate way of India when I left it in the train. Upon realizing
the grave mistake, I went straight to the authorities to get them to check the train at the next station,
but it wasn’t there.
As part of the insurance contract, your company has assigned $1000 for loss of personal items. I would
like you to advise on the next steps to claim this insurance refund. Please let me know what documents
are required for this process.
I look forward to your positive revert at your earliest convenience
Yours faithfully,
Karishma Dave
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, may, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74774774775 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5317399164 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63963963964 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9221214932 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154932821021 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504430908626 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491855156246 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432335234619 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514573282876 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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