Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
People work for most of their lives with retirement as the end goal, but does the age to retire for everyone needs to be the same? Some believe that a common age limit is a fair situation for all whereas others think it should depend on the occupation. In this essay, I will elaborate on the why I agree with a variable age of retirement and highlight some professionals that will benefit from early retirement.
I think it is important that the type of work and it’s affects are considered when a this age is decided for an individual. For certain type of workers, it is cruel to make them work till such an old age. Moreover, another parameter to consider should be the ability to perform after a certain age and if insisting the older employees to continue working will adversly impact their health or the work in itself. Like we can see in the area of sports, depending on the intensity of physical activities, the sprotsmen retire as early as 40 years. When these factors are taken into account, it is clear that a standard age across the spectrum is not a viable option.
Early retirement is the need of the hour for some professions due to its manner of work. If the job is mentally or physicaly intensive, it is not advisable to have a senior citizen working in that field. Contruction workers, for instance, require a degree of strength to lift and work with heavy equipments which will be dangerous for older and weaker bodies. Another group of skilled workers that need to retrie earlier than 65 years are the medical staff as its very risky for them to operate on patients and put their lifes in danger.
To conclude, it is vital that the role and job description is taken into account when deciding on the age limit and not go with a one size fits all approach as it can have a direct impact on peoples lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54354354354 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49261912193 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.880690933 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263029520497 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951959197764 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490766519069 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151387118719 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606120239167 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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