On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter1. Describe the item you lost2. explain how you lost it3. tell

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

1. Describe the item you lost
2. explain how you lost it
3. tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a recent customer of your insurance company. I have acquired a travel insurance for my trip to Thailand with my family on 28th September. Unfortunately, I lost one of my check-in baggage at the Mumbai International airport. Out of the two check-in baggage, the one which I had lost, was a green color American tourister bag, which had 23 kg of items. The contents include clothes, cooking utensils, valuable electronic devices and some basic utilities all worth around Rs. 35000.

I travelled with Jet airways and I had to take a connecting flight from Mumbai. Earlier, the airline staff told me that my baggage would be transferred to the next flight when I inquired them. Moreover, while landing at the Mumbai airport, I again checked with the officials at the airline's counter and they promised me that my baggage would be checked in to the next flight. After landing at Thailand International airport, I was shocked to know that I lost my baggage. I immediately submitted a form mentioning the details of my baggage. After reaching the hotel, I came to know that I lost my baggage permanently.

As per the policies stated in the travel insurance, I am entitled to claim 70 percent value of my lost baggage withing 10 days of the incident. I hereby request you to process my claim request. I would also submit a claim request form. My insurance number is SNT48MK7.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely
Prasanth Gunasekaran

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84251968504 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80807759341 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1203819674 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3529411765 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148088353851 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518566450525 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046249099684 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105015787084 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389479804526 0.0580467560999 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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