Over the centuries, our world has witnessed copious innovations and advancements. But parallely, we are being threatened by the advent of new diseases and most of them directly rely on abnormal weight gain. While there are hefty reasons, the two major causes are the changes in eating habits and the lack of awareness about health among masses. We will discuss both and figure out some remedies.
While it is no denying that food the cure for may illnesses, it is also the cause for a lot of health issues. Street food have become extremely prevalent in many nations, which not only carries diseases, but also results in obesity and weight gain within a short span of time. This argument for instance is further defended by many researchers across the world. Adding to this, people in some countries are unaware of the necessity of fitness and well-being to lead a happy life. In a recent survey in India, it is found that only two percent of people in urban regions exercise regularly. So, major health problems like acute weight gain and diabetes possess direct correlation with deprived physical activity.
Moving to the possible solutions, there should be a co-operation between governments and people to impose a ban on street foods. In developing countries, where it would be extremely tedious to completely stop, regulations could be introduced to mitigate the ill-effects of roadside foods. For example, immense penalties could be levied on unhygienic fast food shops. Furthermore, compulsory education on health and lifestyle should be enforced into the school curriculum, so that the habit of exercising will be nourished from an early age. For instance, a lot of countries, have incorporated health studies in their early education syllabus. This could also be implemented by pedagogical experts in developing nations too.
On recapitulating, it is obvious that wrong diet and refraining from physical activities are the supreme reasons that exacerbates the problem of weight gain. Therefore, policies on junk and street foods should be undoubtedly revised. Not to mention, inculcating health related subjects in academic syllabus is also of immediate importance to abate the ignorance of future generations.
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Suggestion:
...vations and advancements. But parallely, we are being threatened by the advent of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27887323944 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85996103255 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602816901408 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4518613129 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6315789474 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149359687087 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437635392659 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04419993696 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855055533088 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493674211717 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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