In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes and measure to overcome this trend.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes and measure to overcome this trend.

Due to the fast food culture the average weight of people is increasing day-by-day all over the world. Obesity becomes a common disease among most of the youngsters. When children consume more junk foods, this will lead to overweight and they are prone to life threatening diseases. In the following passage, I will explain reasons and measures to overcome this trend.

Does the artificial preservatives are the main cause for the increasing obesity among kids? Yes. Most of the companies use various ingredients to improve the food’s life, which changes the metabolic structure in humans. For instance, the recent survey suggest that kids who consume lays potato chips regularly gained excess weight when compared to others who don’t have such habits. Moreover, due to hectic work pressure both men and women find less time to do physical exercise. Additionally, inaccessibility to parks and gymnasium, prevent them in doing activities such as walking and jogging. Therefore, it is believed, the junk food culture and insufficient physical movements are considered to be the main reasons for this trend.

Corporate companies should include gymnasium as part of their infrastructure plan, this will help most of the youngsters to do the physical workouts regularly. Furthermore, the government should take stern action against companies who add dangerous preservatives which are harmful for the children. In addition, academic institutions should include both indoor and outdoor games as part of their curriculum; this will help most of the children to actively take part in various games and to stay fit. Thus, it is assumes, such initiatives will change this trend to an extent.

To sum up, as the proverb says, “prevention is better than cure”. It is the responsibility of both the parents and the government to foster our younger generation with good food habits as well as incubate them to take organic food regularly. Also, need to remind them that physical exercise should be integral part of our life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31888544892 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9064233231 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7426965994 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144344466259 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453888092674 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566738302 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859531385617 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068027735347 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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