On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
• describe the item you lost
• explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Hello Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that my laptop has been stolen while on vacation to India, and I am very much devastated with the loss.
The laptop was silver colour, with apple’s logo on the top. It was in a backpack which also had the charger and the mouse in it. It was a gift from my parents and it means a lot to me. Mostly, I use this laptop for my personal and some-times official purpose.
While I was travelling from Delhi to Mumbai in a train, which was very crowded, I kept my bag on a fellow passenger’s seat. Well, when I woke-up the next morning I could not find my bag at the place where I kept it last. However, I had filed the police complain (please find the complaint copy attached with this letter), but still I feel the chances of getting it back is quite low.
I would like you to please consider this letter as an application for the insurance claim for the product. I have to buy a new laptop because that is the only source of communication for me as I am in another country. Although, I have attached all the required documents which was mentioned in the website, but still if any other information is required feel free to contact me, my contact information is given in the letter of address proof.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully.
Harry Potter
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... insurance claim for the product. I have to buy a new laptop because that is the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4674796748 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59112782779 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8665193274 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999985464992 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372621968643 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481486563299 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613281808442 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443565683445 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.