On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lst.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter.
- describe the lost item
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the mobile phone which I lost during my recent visit to Malasiya. The model number was Apple S6, costing around 45,000 INR. It was black in colour. Although it was an old phone, I have special attachment with it as it was gifted by my grandfather on my latest birthday.
Actually, I was in hurry on the last day of tour, so I reached at airport very late. I forgot to take print of ticket, therefore I saw e-ticket at the check-in counter. Unfortunately, when my flight was board, suddenly I realized that my phone was not with me. May be I kept it either on counter or charging point in waiting area.
As per insurance policy, all belongings are covered with full reimbursement. I would appreciate if you could pay full amount of my mobile. I am ready to submit original bill of phone and policy certificate. let me know procedure to proceed further as per rules and regulations.
Hope you would reply me at earliest to settle my claim.
Yours faithfully,
James Karle
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...e S6, costing around 45,000 INR. It was black in colour. Although it was an old phone, I have s...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...realized that my phone was not with me. May be I kept it either on counter or charging...
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Line 13, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...l bill of phone and policy certificate. let me know procedure to proceed further as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7027027027 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67140800797 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691891891892 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9906446377 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1428571429 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105243286714 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339555702952 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429615166891 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580455347519 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340254018317 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.