On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter:- Describe a the item you lost- explain how you lost it- tell insurance

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter:

- Describe a the item you lost

- explain how you lost it

- tell insurance company what would you like them to do

Dear sir,

I am penning down this epistle to inform you about the lost of my smart phone during my holiday vacation to Bangkok on last weekend. Since I am fully covered under insurance policy of lost during travel, I am hoping to get my insurance money.

Firstly, this unfortunate incident happened during 21st September 2019 to 27th September 2019. I was on paradise beach when I lost my phone in sand. It was an apple iPhone X which cost me around 75,000. I search for the cellphone for an hour but it was nowhere. Beside this, I immediately logged a FIR in the nearest police station.

Since, I hold insurance coverage for the mobile phone, I would like to claim the full insurance amount for the lost of precious item. I am entitled to claim an amount of 50,000 as an insurance refund for the lost item. I would be thankful to you if you can transfer the same amount into my bank account.

Looking forward to hearing you soon.

Yours Sincerely,

Milan Desai.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67428571429 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40187681718 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0483792619 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283181349866 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911556686137 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739759609866 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165161261593 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898961667377 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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