Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say– Why do you want to work from home?– Why would it be beneficial for the company and yoursel

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to request approval for working from home facility to have an enhanced work-life balance. From our last team meeting, I came to know that this arrangement has been granted for few employees in our team and I would like to leverage the facility. It would not only benefit an individual but also the organization.

As you may be aware, my job profile demands to work late nights sometimes and to attend calls whenever needed. Hence it would be great if I am offered with this arrangement as it will precursor not to miss any calls. Also, since I am residing far from our office premises, it takes 4 hours to travel daily. Eventually, I can save these hours by working efficiently if I work from home and perhaps my productivity will be accelerated.

On top of that, as we are working on the Agile methodology, we ought to attend critical calls such as grooming calls, planning meetings apart from daily meetings. By having this sort of arrangement to work from home, I don’t have to miss any of the meetings. Additionally, with the advancement of technology, this strategy is followed globally and it will precursor to manage the career as well as family in a great manner. Looking forward to your response.

Yours’ faithfully,
Chitra.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...es and to attend calls whenever needed. Hence it would be great if I am offered with ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 411, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a great manner" with adverb for "great"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to manage the career as well as family in a great manner. Looking forward to your response. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, well, apart from, sort of, such as, as well as, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84649122807 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.818899605 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5809358126 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258456537707 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865212384537 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059763791813 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150367363484 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488535049581 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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